I wonder 'how can I be'?
It can't be put off, for another location and time.
As I am lost to the question itself,
All I hope is to pray: 'Let me be'.
'Let me be as I am.
Even though the eyes are blind,
The skin is dark and dry,
And with,
The heart that is void,
The blood that is black,
And the sight that wavers'.
'Let me be as I am.
When friends reject the good,
The world read me wrong,
Reviews rate me low,
Skepticism linger on me'.
'Let me be as I am.
Since, I can't change my past,
Neither my present nor the future.
Everything was there,
Before I came: innate and intimate.
The higher times will look down upon me,
While I am drenched in this world.
Errors are not made, but conditions for the right.
All that defines my humanness, and the capacity to forget and forgive,
Forever and ever'.
'Let me be once again'.
It can't be put off, for another location and time.
As I am lost to the question itself,
All I hope is to pray: 'Let me be'.
'Let me be as I am.
Even though the eyes are blind,
The skin is dark and dry,
And with,
The heart that is void,
The blood that is black,
And the sight that wavers'.
'Let me be as I am.
When friends reject the good,
The world read me wrong,
Reviews rate me low,
Skepticism linger on me'.
'Let me be as I am.
Since, I can't change my past,
Neither my present nor the future.
Everything was there,
Before I came: innate and intimate.
The higher times will look down upon me,
While I am drenched in this world.
Errors are not made, but conditions for the right.
All that defines my humanness, and the capacity to forget and forgive,
Forever and ever'.
'Let me be once again'.
I think it is a good attempt although I don't know if I agree completely :)and you can take it a little more lightly. But, obviously its upto you .
ReplyDeletedisagreement comes only from a mature thought as it is well connected. Keep it up.
DeleteI like difference. I wrote it in a heavy condition.Thanks for the comment.
ReplyDeleteIt is fine :) It revolves around you a lot though, you could put in a bit of 'poetic' imagery.
ReplyDeletedid not think about any imagery while i wrote it...
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